What does it need?

[GreenPartyVoter]

Last edited Sat Jan 30, 2021, 07:56 AM - Edit history (1)

[Hoyt]

1. Nothing, it's nice and I really like the colors. Add a Bernie Sanders if you must.

[soothsayer]

4. Ha!

[MLAA]

2. A kid or a cat peeking out the window? So you don't notice it at first glance 😬

Though it looks great as is.

[MontanaMama]

3. To be on the wall

of a winery.

[GreenPartyVoter]

5. It's a teensy little winery. Sow's ear. :)

[Sanity Claws]

6. Are you sure you need something?

If you do, maybe something in the upper right corner? A dark cloud that casts a shadow and adds some ambiguity in mood? Maybe just a more intense blue in part of the sky?

[wendyb-NC]

7. It's quite lovely the way it is.

[JDC]

8. Leave it. It's great

I use water colors and ink pen a lot and I sometimes overdo it. I have found that if I walk away from something or put it away for a month, then review it later, it is much better than I thought originally. Perceived "imperfections" at the time of creation are assets in 2 weeks.

I think this is really, really good. Frame and hang it.

Thanks for sharing.

[Karadeniz]

9. If anything, perhaps the house and sky colors are too similar.

[flying rabbit]

10. I would go with more contrast in the

vegetation closest to us, and make the sky less monochromatic.

[bif]

11. I think it looks great.

Maybe add a little more contrast in the sky. But otherwise, I wouldn't change a thing.

[Star-Thrower]

12. Perhaps

more shades of green? I would darken the sky a little bit, but this is your work not mine, and it is as it should be. So keep up the good work!