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bif

(25,220 posts)
Thu Apr 24, 2025, 10:44 PM 14 hrs ago

I just started writing haikus

I've never been a big fan of poetry in general. But this format fascinates me. Here's one of the first ones I've attempted:

Dawn
Clouds part for the sun
A stillness settles my soul
Chirping birds report

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I just started writing haikus (Original Post) bif 14 hrs ago OP
Earth Day on the mind? CrispyQ 14 hrs ago #1
Thank you! bif 14 hrs ago #2
Beautiful verse, Bif! SheltieLover 13 hrs ago #3
Thank you! bif 3 hrs ago #4
Yw! SheltieLover 1 hr ago #5
I've written about a dozen so far bif 1 hr ago #6
Post more? SheltieLover 10 min ago #7

bif

(25,220 posts)
2. Thank you!
Thu Apr 24, 2025, 10:51 PM
14 hrs ago

I usually get up several hours before my wife does. It's my favorite time of day. So peaceful and the perfect time to think. (And write poems).

SheltieLover

(66,804 posts)
5. Yw!
Fri Apr 25, 2025, 11:48 AM
1 hr ago

I love haiku & senryu, the latter following the same format, but speaking about human nature & I suppose other animals' natures.

I used to write a lot of them & started carrying a tablet (paper lol) & pen with me so that as life presented verse inspiration, I could capture it in the fly.

Pretty soon, the muses were taking over my conscious life, so I stopped.

Maybe I should take it back up, as a diversion wouldn't be a bad thing these days.

Have you written others?

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